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Beautifully done. Perfect for the topic.
I want to know more! Does she get everything she hoped for? Great story!
Really enjoyed the descriptions and how they took me right into the scene. Also like how she hung on to her hope for the future. Nicely done.
I was captivated from the first sentence. You did a good job of capturing your mc's hope for her future.
My heart is racing with anticipation right along with Mikri's. Great job making the reader feel your MC's emtotions. First-rate!
What are we without hope; a great job. The last line was classic.
Fantastic writing. I love the voice of your MC and her story was one of hope through adversity...a story of universal appeal. Great job!

Well done, a wonderful story of hope.
This is just wonderful - a brilliant story with such a realistic feel, because surely these were the feeling as the 50 year wait drew to a close. Your characters are portrayed so well. This theme is one I've often been tempted to write of, but I couldn't do it like this! Excellent.
What an awesome idea! I love this story. Well done!