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01/21/11
What a unique take on the topic! Really great sense of detail and your characters were so relatable. Great work!
Good job here with sci fi. I really like your mc.
01/22/11
We will never be out of His reach. Such an encouraging message told in a unique and well written fashion. The stars always facinated me. I enjoyed your story much.
01/22/11
Very nice SciFi entry. You would think that God would feel all the more closer to us the higher into the Heavens we get. Nice job!
01/22/11
Amazing, isn't it, that in the vastness of the universe God knows even the number of hairs on our head. He cares for us, wherever we may be in His creation.
01/22/11
I like this. A touch of sci-fi, but still very relevant, and something people can relate to. Nice job!
01/22/11
Loved your successful attempt at Sci-fi. You brought me off the earth, but not so far out that I couldn't follow what was going on. Great job!
01/23/11
I didn't really get the sci-fi-ish feel to it other than generalities. Could just be me. But you piqued an interest in me of a sci-fi story that proves God's existence using science and creation.

Good job stepping out of your comfort zone and venturing into new territory. Keep searching for multiple voices. You are a talented writer!
01/23/11
I love your creativity! From the name of the species, "Bethatoseans" to when she was "standing on the observation deck of the Galactic Eagle" and could see the 360* view of stars..(I wanted to be there with her.) Can we have another chapter? :)
01/24/11
Very creative angle on the topic. I really think that Christian Sci-Fi is an unexplored field. This is a story that could be developed into a novel. How would a space explorer deal with questions of faith? Well done, and well worthy of a sequel!
I enjoy YA novels so much. I think it's my favorite genre, so I could easily see this being for teens or adults. It did vaguely make me think that with some adjustments this would fit into the next PeP book. I can't remember if you've been apart of them before, but it might be the way to go. I really enjoyed the setting and your details. The MC was perfect too!