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01/14/11
Neat story - strange encounter, indeed! I enjoyed this very much.
Got it, and loved it. Very well told and enjoyed it from beginning to end. I remember stopping someone I saw shoplifting before and offered to buy it for them and she refused and still walked out. I told the cashier, she acted like she didn't care. So I paid and left. But this is your story:) great job!
Very, very nice job. You deserve big time kudos for this one!
01/18/11
Not the same circumstances, but I too have had a similar experience with a "disappearing stranger." We never know who...when...or where do we? But, it is an experience that forever alters your "thinking" and causes your thoughts to always "expect" these types of endings.
Enjoyed every moment of your story.
Nicely written story. I like the touch of the security camera as the end. (Gotta love those guardian angels!) Good job with an entertaining and valuable story.