The Official Writing Challenge
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12/23/10
The story of 'Three Unwise Men'. Humorous, but with a much different message. Creative take on the topic.
12/23/10
I enjoyed this! Somehow I've always pictured the Wise Men as austere and elegant, but I love how you portrayed them - human-like and foilable. A nice read, this time of year, particularly.
This is fun. Well written, good dialogue. The story was cleverly imagined and skillfully conveyed.
Great story from the Bible--shows very clearly the meaning of the topic. The humor adds to the interest in the story.
12/28/10
I love the constant and credible flow of life and energy, the colours and the dialogue as you have drawn us into this snapshot. The identity of your travellers was clear very early, but you weren't obviously trying to pull any sudden revelations. You can judge whether this was wise - or otherwise...
12/29/10
I liked the way you described Behzad. Sounds like a fun though unconventional Wise Man.
12/29/10
Heehee! Great characterizations. I loved the touches of humor in here and that poor camel. Great read!