The Official Writing Challenge
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12/18/10
I felt so comfortable sitting along side your sweet little girl. I could feel her homesickness. This is just so lovely and believable. Love it bunches!
Your sweet story shows so well the homesickness of the little girl and how her bond with the kitten comforts her.well done.
This was a sweet story that gave me quite a bit of insight into what it would be like to come to a totally foreign country.
12/18/10
Taking a look at ourselves from another's perspective is hard enough, but to write this view down takes real skill. And you have warmly shown us this skill. Very well done.
12/19/10
Very skillfully written. I can almost picture the interactions with the animals.
12/22/10
Aw, I loved this story! Especially the Texas setting, well done! I could feel her sadness, yet peace. Great!