The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the old sounding dialect used for this sweet story.
From the title I was expecting an Elvis story. I was delighted to read this version of a Cinderella story. I do hope her joy in meeting her king won't stop her from seeking The King! Great read.
11/23/10
Cinderalla or Esther,your story reminded me of both. I know word count probably got in the way, but I kept hoping to find out what happened after her encounter; you know, a fairy tale ending with a "forever after." I think this qualifies as a serial.