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Hey there! Great entry! I loved how you created this story around the topic. I could really feel for the mom who had to give up her daughter.

I think I would have liked it if there had been a little more to the ending. It makes me want to know if they were ever able to meet.

Thanks for a great article. I enjoyed it. :)
This is beautiful. I can feel the mom's pain and anxiety. You did a good job showing her feelings.