The Official Writing Challenge
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09/10/10
I found this to be moving. You made me feel such sorrow for Contessa, but by the end of the story, I felt hope for her, as well. Good writing!
This is a really deep piece. It made me think how lucky I am to be born into my family. Sometimes you can speak volumes without saying a word. I'm glad Contessa finally found her voice again.
I'm glad your MC decided to speak at the end. This was a tragic story, well written.
Poor kid... would love to hear more of here story! What did she say? How did others react? Then what happended?
09/16/10
Love this one. Your atmosphere was incredible. great MC. Well done!
09/16/10
I agree with Barb, I want to know more. Then too you are good at that leaving me wondering what comes next. Well done once again.
This is really good. I wanted more. I enjoyed the way you developed your main character. Great job.
09/24/10
Wow. This is a great story. Reminds me of a good book I just read called "Paper Hearts". You should totally extend it into a longer story.