The Official Writing Challenge
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This reminds me of the publican and the sinner... You made me think! I like your end line...
Quite a lesson here, and a good reminder to us all, made even more palatable by a dash of humor!
All too true! Good read-kept my interest to the end.
Self-righteous chiding. Loved it! A good reminder to us all. Also enjoyed thinking about how "too close for comfort" this felt for many of us. :)
This poem just flows. I'd love to be able to write poetry as smoothly as you do. I smiled at the tongue-in-cheek comments. What a great way to prove your point.
I think she used to go to my church years ago. Hmph! I could even see your MC. Well done, Verna, very well done indeed.
Oops - I'm a little too familiar with a lot of these lines - this was a little guilt provoking but in a good way.
Very good. You keep proving time and time again you're one of my favorites. I have felt some of the same things. Great job. God bless.
Wow, great take! Loved the flow of this, awesome!
Think the MC needs to get the plank out of her eye--that's the Bible passage I thought of while reading this fun entry.
Really well done! Enjoyed it much.
A mind-reader as well...not just an excellent writer. The tone of this is perfect for the topic.