The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/10
Excellent writing and vivid descriptions. I felt like I was in the room watching the scene unfold.
02/22/10
Oooh, I loved the scene shifts alternating between the seen and unseen action. I can always appreciate angel stories that portray them as warriors instead of docile creatures. It was a tad predictable because we all know that the angel was going to whoop the demon's tail:) Still, very entertaining with a spot on message. Loved your closing line. Great writing!
Reminds me of Frank Perritti's writings.

We may never know what is going on in the spiritual rhelm around us!
I have to agree with another comment...reminds me of Peretti, and he's one of my favorites. Very well written!
02/23/10
Very vivid and breathless descriptions of what was "really" going on...loved this piece
I love the title. If we could only see what's going on around us -- but maybe it's better if we don't. Excellent writing!
02/23/10
Wow! Excellent reminder of the spiritual battle that is continually being fought on our behalf! You brought "the action" up close and personal! Stunning entry!
02/24/10
I'm so glad we have angels helping us fight our spiritual battles! Great visuals here.
02/24/10
The title drew me in and your excellent story-telling kept me there. I know it's been said, but that's exactly what I was thinking when reading this story...it reminds me of a Peritti book. Good read.
I love the POV and the thought of angels fighting for something so important.