The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/09
Great story, beginning with your title! I enjoyed the tie-in with the children's chorus (especially your altered lyrics :) ).
12/06/09
A good fun take on the persistence of a posiitve attitude. Though I imagine that "indoor pluming" could be more ticklish than indoor plumbing.
12/08/09
Cute story, with rapid pacing that was fun to read.

Do people really talk like this? And there was one place where I lost track of the speakers (toward the middle), and one girl seemed to say what the other girl would have.

The girls' relationship is fun and endearing.
12/08/09
Fun story! How bold of you to refer to poop!