The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely story. Noticed a few awkard sentances. And, who is Myra?
11/12/09
Great story. Good descriptions!
I really enjoyed this story and the happy ending. Indeed sometimes it is OK to sacrifice a little for something seemingly frivolous. I liked the description of her seeing the look on his face when he saw her in the purple dress. Just btw, I had no trouble knowing that Myra was her good, but sensible, friend who was trying to keep her from spending money she might regret. I'm glad Sasha didn't follow Myra's advice and went ahead and splurged. Good story.
11/15/09
This is an excellent story. Good imagery throughout and I absolutely love the title. In fact, the title is what brought me in - the story line kept me here. Excellent! Laura
I too was especially fond of the title. And I'm a sucker for a good love story. Nicely told and a happy ending too! Good job.