The Official Writing Challenge
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10/15/09
Amen - true indeed:)
10/16/09
Great flow, rhythm, rhyme and message throughout. Enjoyed this A+ devotional poem.
10/20/09
Wonderfully descriptive of our Lord in all His ways and goodness! I love the light and airy feel of this poem--just right for "blue".
10/21/09
I could almost hear a majestic tune flowing through this!
10/21/09
As I read this I thought how it says enough in these few verses to "tell the gospel". The simple, easy flow reflected the simple, easy message. Yet, both are full of power.

Mona
How do you do it? Once again you've packed truth into a pleasant, perfectly metered and rhymed poem. Kudos!
10/21/09
Excellent poem--loved the last stanza!
10/21/09
You have a great poem. I like your use of your title in your poem. You used it, but you didn't overuse it.
Another winner for your book! I'm getting so I can spot your poetry a mile away for its excellent word carpentry. I can't tell you often enough how good your writing is!