The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/09
What a perfect title for this topic!
07/23/09
Awww, poor thing. Loved the descriptions and of course, the title! Excellent piece.
07/23/09
Great title. I got a kick out of reading it. God bless.
07/23/09
This was hilarious! Loved it!
07/23/09
I usually pass by poems, but the title intrigued me and I had to read it. Excellent.
This humorous narrative poem is delightful from title to the end, and you nailed the topic. Great job!
07/24/09
Oh how cute! I guess we were all "fifteen" once and did silly things. I think I would have DIED if a boy had talked to me at that age. I disliked BOYS immensely. But I sure did stupid things, like buying Mom a special "candy dish" that I learned when I gave it to her that it was an "ash tray." Was my face red! Oh there are lots of things a 15 year old girl does that she wished could be wiped from her slate. But your experience "took the cake!"--or should I say, "ice cream." I guess you ate "humble pie" that night...Loved it...Helen
07/25/09
So much fun! Loved the title, too.
07/26/09
A perfect title and a fun read! And haven't we all been there in one way or another, bright red and wishing the ground would open and swallow us whole.
07/27/09
Loved the highs and lows. How did we survive them without God's grace?
Ha, this is great! Nice rythmn and rhyme, and great story.
07/29/09
Cute, cute, cute. Hope she learned her lesson ;-)
07/29/09
Oh, been there a time or two. You wrote this so well. It's sometimes hard to capture the essence of a story in rhyme. But, you did it. Great writing.
Mona
Oh how cute! I love the humor in your poem. It was good and described adolescence so well. Great writing!