The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/09
That monster cat!! Made me giggle - and I love the line "but Jesus is in my heart, not under my bed!" Fun piece.
05/29/09
Oh my - very cute. Love this.
05/30/09
This sounds just like something a kid would say '“Yes, Mommy, but Jesus is in my heart, not under my bed.”' Poor mom is never going to convince him she's right again.
06/02/09
I LOVE it! Perfect ending, and charming story.
06/02/09
What a hoot! The picture of mother soothing son was so endearing and then to find there really was a monster (sort of) under the bed. Thanks for writing something with a lighter flair. Lots of drama this week so a bit of laughter is truly a welcome relief.
06/03/09
What a hoot! I also loved the line with "Jesus is in my heart, not under my bed" ROFL! The words of children. This was lovely, VernaJ! ^_^
06/03/09
Very cute and interesting. Held my attention with lucid writing.

Thankyou. Colin
06/03/09
I totally enjoyed the humor of Mr. Peepers being under the bed!!! You are versatile with your writing! :)
06/03/09
darn cat. Very amusing piece.
06/03/09
No feeling like that of a 4 yr old making you feel foolish.
just loved this one!
Mona
"Out of the mouths of.." hehe. Really cool.