The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/09
:) I like this. I'm sure many can relate.
05/23/09
Creative take on the topic, and a great job with voice. Enjoyed this.
I surely did identify with this--all the way through. You eased into the wonderful message quite comfortably.
05/23/09
My favorite descriptive line: The words seemed to ooze off the page like chocolate syrup and I lapped up every one.
I really enjoyed this story from start to finish. Your MC's voice was believeable in every way. So glad she knows that in God's photo album, she's beautiful.
Very nicely done and just the right touch of humor.
05/23/09
I love the thought of being in God's photo album.
04/11/10
Nicely done--As w/ Lisa, I found "ballooning mass" intriguingly descriptive. The phrase "my old fat pants" has an interesting ring too. :)