The Official Writing Challenge
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04/16/09
Brilliant.
04/16/09
You masterfully captured the pure essence of this Bible story in perfect rhyme.
An awesome retelling of the Bible story.
04/18/09
So much truth packed in such a short poem. Well done.
04/19/09
Wonderful image in the title (I'd never heard of that before), and you did a great job with your unusual structure and rhyme scheme. I enjoyed this very much.
Good job! Thanks for your explanation at the end. I learned something new. Creative take on cold and hot.
04/20/09
WOW!! I loved this poem for both it's excellent composition and for its powerful message! (I had just read this Bible story for my morning devotions, so it was especially meaningful to me today!) So well written! :)
04/21/09
Excellent job! Well done.
I don't write poetry, but I greatly admire those who can. This is a great poem, and there is much Biblical truth to be reminded of here. Loved reading this!