The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/09
Creative and very well done.
04/09/09
Hilarious and oh so entertaining! Great poem-story.
04/09/09
Very clever. I like the way you rhymed the last word of each stanza.
04/10/09
This was a fun entry. I really wanted to buy some new strings for that sackbut player. Very well written and entertaining.
Loved this all the way through and the last stanza solidified my smile. Wonderful work!
I'm amazed at the creativity, as well as the beauty, of your poem. Just one question: Where in the world did you find that many words that end in "ation"?
04/11/09
Simply masterful. How do you do it?
Mona
I went back a second time and read the poem aloud. It is amazing and very unique. Love it!
04/12/09
What a brilliant approach to the topic...and the last stanza was perfection. Loved this!
04/13/09
Beth, this is one of my favorites of yours, since I love both music and sharp rhyme.

By the way, I don't mind "The" in titles like this...just in short titles like "The Sackbut".

This is just amazingly good!
04/14/09
Masterful writing here! I loved the story told in your flowing descriptive style! :)