The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/09
I really like this—though the ending seemed to come a bit abruptly. Well done in any case.
02/14/09
Beautifully constructed and lovely meter. Love the scripture that introduces each set of stanzas.
02/19/09
A. Mazing. Wowzer.
02/19/09
Beth, your poetry never ceases to amaze me. This was awesome.. I love the flow of it. Masterful, inspiring, brilliant writing
Absolutely lovely poem in every way. What a gift you have.
02/20/09
I loved the introduction of each Bible verse, and what you wrote after each verse was amazing. And the title is quite fitting.
Nice job!