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11/22/08
What a mature boy - his gratefulness is so admirable. Your descriptions were very vivid, and I just fell in love with this boy. Truly enjoyed this.
11/22/08
Love this story. What a neat kid!
Your family Christmas is portrayed excellently and the character of the little boy is especially well done.
11/25/08
That little guy has great character and spread his joy to others. Good to see his thankfulness!
11/25/08
Sounds like Christmas Eve at my cousin's place! Sensitive kid wrapped in a good story.
11/25/08
Perfect title for this story. I love this little boy's heart.