Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Forums Join
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
E
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  



The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge

BACK TO
CHALLENGE
MAIN

INSTRUCTIONS

how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level

ENTRIES

submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners



Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.





TRUST JESUS TODAY

TRY THE TEST



Share
how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: Christmas Lights (10/30/08)

TITLE: The Lights (With a Tip of the Hat to "The Bells" by Edgar Allen Poe)
By Verna Cole Mitchell
11/02/08


 LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
 SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 SEND ARTICLE TO A FRIEND
 ADD TO MY FAVORITES

See the stately tree with lights -
Christmas lights!
What a world of happiness their lovely view incites
As they shimmer, shimmer, shimmer,
In the darkness of the room,
Where the children catch a glimmer
And with joyful hearts a-simmer,
They have happy hopes in bloom.
Then they twirl, twirl, twirl,
As with joyousness they whirl
To the beauty that invites
From the lights, lights, lights, lights
Lights, lights, lights,
From the glimmer and the shimmer of the lights.

See the brilliance of the lights -
Christmas lights!
What a world of blessedness their radiance ignites!
How they shine, shine, shine,
With an incandescent beam
Of significance divine,
Like the magiís holy sign
That had come to them in dream,
As they glow, glow, glow,
In a grand symbolic show
Of the star that shone so brightly on that holiest of nights.
Oh the lights, lights, lights, lights,
Lights, lights, lights -
Oh the shining and the glowing of the lights!


The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
Accept Jesus as Your Lord and Savior Right Now - CLICK HERE
JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.


This article has been read 828 times
Member Comments
Member Date
Jan Ackerson 11/06/08
I love this so much that I can't TELL you how much I love this! What a marvelous tribute to "The Bells", and with wonderful word choices and superb atmosphere. LOVE IT!!!
Dee Yoder 11/06/08
I love this, too. It has a sophisticated and unusual rhythm, descriptions that are simply perfect, and a joyful and happy sound that is just the way Christmas should be!
Beth LaBuff 11/06/08
My mind was singing this as I read it. Excellent work! I think Edgar would like it too. :)
cindy yarger11/07/08
I got all caught up in this. Very well done!
Sharlyn Guthrie11/07/08
Well done! Besides the form, your word choices and imagery are wonderful.
Gregory Kane11/08/08
Ditto, a fitting homage to 'the Bells'.
My one moan would be that you stopped too soon!
Joanne Sher 11/08/08
Beautiful and lovely. What everyone else said.
Scott Sheets11/10/08
Well written and engaging! Great Job!
Pamela Kliewer11/10/08
OK - I'm doing a little jig now and anxious for Thanksgiving to come soooo that after we can get to decorating for
Christmas with lights and all! :)
Celeste Ammirata11/10/08
Excellent! Ditto all the above. God Bless.
Leah Nichols 11/11/08
I've never read "The Bells" but I'm sure this is a fitting reflection, based on the rhythm of the poem. Excellent work!
Yvonne Blake 11/11/08
oooh.... I had to re-read it out loud and I could hear all the shades of sounds. Beautiful!
Loren T. Lowery11/12/08
Oh the lights, the brilliant wonderful lights --- oh how you have brought them to life and made them so real!

Loren
Shirley McClay 11/12/08
Not into poetry much but this blew me away. I wanted more to read!
Rick Higginson 11/12/08
Poe was certainly a master when it came to meter, and you've captured the flow beautifully, without losing any coherence in your new lyrics. Very nice.
Angela M. Baker-Bridge11/12/08
I never read "The Bells" either, but you've got me curious now...well done on its own merits.
George Parler 11/12/08
This was a delight to read. Excellent choice of words to say so much with so little. Well done.
T. F. Chezum11/12/08
Excellent. This was a treat to read.
Margaret Kearley 04/19/12
I love this Verna - there are such beautiful lines. I particularly loved 'How they shine, shine, shine,
With an incandescent beam
Of significance divine,
Like the magiís holy sign' The repeated words are so powerful and clever -
it has definitely made me want to read 'The Bells' but I think I might enjoy your take more. Its so full of joy and 'Christmassy'!! Thankyou