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08/21/08
OUCH!
Nothing like marriage (and parenting) to show us ourselves, right?
Great job.
08/21/08
I love how you tied this up—it is a two way street, isn't it. Very good.
08/22/08
What a great fit for the topic, and what an engaging read! Love those last two lines especially - and so realistic to get so caught in our own perceptions that we ignore others' of us. Nicely done.
I loved the line, "No more time to say 'I don't.'"
I was glad your mc's fears that her groom would suddenly turn into a thoughtless slob were not true. Her sudden realization was just the right way to end the story.
I chuckled out loud at the ending. I really enjoyed this. Good work.
08/27/08
I loved the internal dialog and how God revealed her own heart to her... Nice job, Cheri
08/27/08
Your ending is such an eye-opener. I've always loved a good "pot calling the kettle black" story and this story is definitely a good one.
I love this. I understand your MC's thoughts so very well! :D