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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: Telephone (07/17/08)

TITLE: The Phone in the Middle of Nowhere
By Betty Castleberry
07/21/08


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The Joshua trees stretched out their sword-like limbs toward the solitary phone booth, as if to point the way. Lizards sunned themselves on nearby rocks, and long-legged desert insects skittered across the sand, darting around the booth. The traffic noise was buried fifteen miles in the distance.

A rude jangling sound cut through the peaceful desert, signaling another curious caller’s attempt to reach someone, anyone, who might be near the booth.

Surprisingly, someone did answer. “Hello?”

“Hello. Is this the phone in the middle of nowhere?”

“Yes, it is. How may I help you?”

“I don’t know. I just wanted to call. Why is that phone out there?”

“It was originally put here about 1960. Some say it was for the miners, but some people say they really don’t know exactly why it’s here. The folks at Pacific Bell that put it here in the first place are long gone now.”

There was a pause on the line. The caller cleared his throat. “It’s been there that long, huh?”

“Yes sir. There is an excellent reason why it is still here, though.”

“Okay, I’ll bite. What is it?”

The man leaned back against the bullet riddled phone booth and crossed one ankle over the other. He took a deep breath. “It’s here so I can answer it. God has sent me to this phone booth to tell people about Jesus.”

“You don’t say. Well, listen, it’s been nice talking to you.” A click on the other end of the line signaled the end of the conversation.

Rick Karr left the phone booth and sat down in the folding lawn chair by his Jeep. He twisted open the cap of his bottled water and chugged until it was gone. With a flip of his wrist, the bottle landed inside the Jeep. Then he laid his head back in the chair, adjusted his sunglasses, and closed his eyes against the pounding desert sun.

He had just dozed off when the hum of a motor woke him. A white pick up truck bounced to a stop next to his Jeep, and a young couple got out.

The man, dressed in torn jeans, and his long brown hair pulled back in a ponytail, approached Rick. “Hey man. This must be the famous phone booth.”

“It is.”

“We’re on our way to the coast and wanted to see it. You been here long?”

“A couple of days.”

‘No kiddin’. Any calls?”

“Yes, a few. All curiosity seekers, of course.”

“How long are you going to stay?”

“As long as God tells me I should.”

The man looked down at the ground, then at the woman standing beside him.

Rick spoke again. “Do you know Jesus?”

The young lady answered. “I used to go to church when I was little.

“Say, you wouldn’t happen to have any water would you?”

Rick rose from his chair and walked the few steps to his vehicle. The woman spoke just under her breath. “Great. We would run into a Jesus freak in the middle of the desert.”

All attention was on the phone booth again when the phone began to ring. The pony-tailed man answered it. Rick caught snatches of the brief conversation. “Yep, it’s really here. Okay, man.”

When the man emerged from the booth, Rick handed a bottle of water to him and his traveling companion.

“Thanks. We’ve got to go. Cool phone booth, huh?”

“Yes. Very cool. Jesus loves you.”

He nodded a goodbye. “Whatever, man. Thanks again for the water.”

Rick watched the truck disappear in the direction of the freeway. He turned his attention back to the ringing telephone. “Hello?”

The voice on the other end was feminine. “Somebody answered. I finally got an answer.”

“You certainly did. Have you called many times?”

“Yes, but not for a while. I used to call all the time.” Her voice broke. “You don’t know what it means to finally get an answer. I really need a friend right now.”

“You’ve called the right place, then. I’d like to introduce you to the best friend you’ll ever have.” Rick looked heavenward and spoke. “Do you know Jesus Christ?”


Author’s Note: This is based on a true story. A phone booth with a working telephone, located in the Mojave Desert 15 miles from the freeway, became a famous novelty. It was the subject of news reports and a movie. A man named Rick Karr felt led there to share the gospel to callers. The phone booth was removed in the year 2000 and replaced with a headstone. The headstone has since been removed as well.


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Lynda Schultz 07/24/08
No kidding! What a fascinating story. Now you have to write one about the headstone! Well done.
Lynda Lee Schab 07/24/08
Way cool! I was all set to comment on how creative this piece was. To hear it's based on a true story is amazing! I love it!
Joanne Sher 07/25/08
Oh, is that ever a cool story! I LOVE it's true, and how well you dramatized it. Just fascinating and excellent.
Amy Michelle Wiley 07/27/08
I agree that this is a cool story. Perfect for this challenge topic! :-)
Joy Faire Stewart07/28/08
Amazing story from the opening paragraph to the last word. Excellent!
Chely Roach07/28/08
What an awesome story...even cooler that it's true. Well done.
Lyn Churchyard07/28/08
Great story Betty. Isn't it wonderful how God uses people in the strangest places.
Catrina Bradley 07/28/08
Cool story - thanks for telling it! The details put me right in the desert (I think I'm sweating!) :)
Verna Cole Mitchell 07/29/08
It's a gift to be able to take the "news" and turn it into a very interesting story. Great job.
George Parler 07/29/08
I really liked the story but finding out at the end that it was based on true events was the icing on the cake. Good job.
Lauryn Abbott07/30/08
What a cool, and odd story. Totally enjoyable read.
Laury Hubrich 07/30/08
What an awesome story! Thanks for sharing it!
Laury
Deborah Engle 07/30/08
What an awesome story!
Shirley McClay 07/30/08
Ohhh... so cool. Makes me want to check out the phone too!
Mariane Holbrook07/30/08
You're something else, you know that?? What a great story, so original and just what I've come to expect from you, my good friend.
Pamela Kliewer07/30/08
Wow. That is so cool. Well done. :)
Sara Harricharan 07/30/08
WOW! A truly amazing story. I've never heard/known about this...I loved the way it ended though and the fact that there really was a phone booth in the middle of nowhere...just wow. Awesome writing! ^_^
Helen Dowd 07/30/08
Very strange, a phone in the middle of nowhere. Truth is stranger than fiction, they say. Good story. A bit unbelievable at first, but glad to see that it really was a true story. "The Lord works in mysterious ways, His wonders to perform."...Helen
Sharlyn Guthrie07/30/08
Great story, and especially interesting since it's true. Thanks for sharing!
Joshua Janoski07/30/08
What a cool story! It's too bad that the phone booth has been removed, but good for Rick using it to witness to people.

I loved, loved, loved this. So engaging and interesting to read.
Joy Faire Stewart07/31/08
Betty, congratulations on your EC. This is one of my favorites this week.
Edy T Johnson 07/31/08
Congratulations, Betty! Fascinating story, you gave it a mysterious flavor that I love.
Patricia Turner07/31/08
Betty, I'm so glad you told this tale, and told it so well. Congratulations on your EC win!