The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
Oh what a precious thing memory is! This was a strange story. I am not sure I got the full meaning. But I am glad Dan got his memory restored to him. ... Helen
Delightful story--creative and charming. I loved it.
07/19/08
Neat and creative - love how the memories slowly came back. Enjoyed this very much.
07/20/08
It made me wonder what i would find in such a place! I liked the gadget's names! Very creative.
I'd be lying if I said I thought I "got it." But whatever "it" is, it was a great read and I'll keep checking back to see if someone can explain it to me. You'd make a great mystery writer (and probably already are!) :-)
07/23/08
This story was a good eye-opener for all of us to be thankful that God has blessed us with memory. How could we learn from our mistakes, or mature as persons without it?
07/23/08
We never did come to a final decision as to whose story was the stranger this week, but I must say that I "got" what you were trying to convey here. It didn't seem weird to me at all. We live in a world where everything is done in cyberspace now, and technology has detached us from society in many ways.

This was cool. The only thing I didn't get was who Lilian was, but maybe I just overlooked something while I was reading. Regardless, I am glad that you shared this unique offering. :)