The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
Oh what a precious thing memory is! This was a strange story. I am not sure I got the full meaning. But I am glad Dan got his memory restored to him. ... Helen
Delightful story--creative and charming. I loved it.
07/19/08
Neat and creative - love how the memories slowly came back. Enjoyed this very much.
07/20/08
It made me wonder what i would find in such a place! I liked the gadget's names! Very creative.
07/20/08
I'd be lying if I said I thought I "got it." But whatever "it" is, it was a great read and I'll keep checking back to see if someone can explain it to me. You'd make a great mystery writer (and probably already are!) :-)
07/23/08
This story was a good eye-opener for all of us to be thankful that God has blessed us with memory. How could we learn from our mistakes, or mature as persons without it?
We never did come to a final decision as to whose story was the stranger this week, but I must say that I "got" what you were trying to convey here. It didn't seem weird to me at all. We live in a world where everything is done in cyberspace now, and technology has detached us from society in many ways.

This was cool. The only thing I didn't get was who Lilian was, but maybe I just overlooked something while I was reading. Regardless, I am glad that you shared this unique offering. :)