The Official Writing Challenge
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We can hear the rumbles of the Black Bean Lasange coming from Max.

What went under the table, tho' it is gone yet speaketh.

Good use of the topic I think.
02/29/08
Funny. Poor Max would have preferred more words, less action.
03/03/08
I enjoyed the humor! Good job.
03/03/08
Hilarious!
03/03/08
When you said 'it's not too good' on the boards you must've been talking about the lasagna and not this story because this is GREAT!! I LOVE it!! LoL. Poor Max.
Very creative - I hope - I'd feel terrible having a good laugh at Max's expense :) Thanks...
LOL oh dear, poor Max. The story was right on topic, and I think Max's actions will soon speak louder than words too. Great story, very funny.
03/03/08
Oh Betty! How could you do this to poor Max?! I can't stand the dicomfort that poor dog felt! But boy ... they do have stinky 'beans.' ;) Too funny Betty!
Your light touch was a nice change, I can see it all play out and feel bad for poor Max, hopefully the humans learned the lesson. THanks for sharing.
03/05/08
SO clever and fun. Absolutely delightful, Betty. You just have a gift for humor. Poor Max!
Oh this is a hoot! Poor Max, no wonder he's got a belly ache. hehehehe. I love your sense of humor Betty. This was great.
03/05/08
Ok, so now, how do you think this stuff up? Did this really happen? My ONLY, and I mean my ONLY wish for this piece to make it better would have been a different title, only because then I knew what happened. If I hadn't known the title, I wouldn't have known the ending. Of course, you managed to surprise me anyway, with the way the poor thing consumed it. Not one but SEVERAL plates. I can picture the whole scene! :)
03/05/08
I LOVE the last line!
Very funny! Poor Max, he didn't know what he was getting himself into when he ate all that lasagna. This was a joy to read. Thank you so much for sharing it!
Oh, I knew from the title what was going to be wrong with Max. You have passed humorous at some point and gone for hilarious. Such a funny, creative story!
Add one more reason for having a dog in the house. This was a "gas" to read and I loved the irony of it all.
03/05/08
Poor Max! What a hoot - I enjoyed this story. :)
03/05/08
Oh Betty! Too too funny! Hilarious! I really needed a laugh today, too! Thanks.
Laury
03/05/08
Poor feller--poor old Max. I feel sorry for him! Funny yet-so-true scene.
03/05/08
So clever!
I was giggling the whole time. The poor pooch. Remind me not to look that recipe up. My family is full of hot air, as it is.
03/05/08
Oh boy. I'm still laughing. Poor, poor Max! I had a hint from your title when she said 'gassy'. Ouch. This was too funny. I liked how you illustrated the topic here...in a very..um, interersting-lol-way. ^_^ Nice writing! ^_^
03/05/08
How cute! Poor Max! ROFL This was great! Loved the humor!
Very fun and cute. I enjoyed this. Poor Max!
03/05/08
What a treat -- for us, not for Max. I really enjoyed this.