The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/07
Cute - and ironically, we're watching a Book of Pooh video while reading this charming tale :)
Very cute!
04/20/07
This was quite cute, right down to the title. Nice lesson as well!
04/20/07
Cute, well written story. I'm was just sitting here feeling kind of worthless, so this story was a great reminder. Thanks for the smiles.
04/23/07
This is very nice! I like the fairy-tale feel and tone of it, though at the last end it's somewhat awkward when reading aloud. Otherwise, (to echo other comments) very "cute" I like 'plain, boring' Jane.
04/23/07
I'm a sucker for a fairy tale, and I love this one! A lot of imagination went into this story.
04/23/07
Delightful! Great writing!
04/24/07
Made me chuckle. You started off with just the right tone to suggest a nonscence tale and delivered just that. But I did find the last three paras were a bit flat. yeggy