The Official Writing Challenge
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09/01/06
Lovely. The way you capitalized key words is effective.

Perhaps the challenge topic was a little too much 'the star of the show' - a tad forced? But I'm only offering my own opinion to a master's writer where it is okay to be a little critical, right?

Good work. Great sentiments.
Liked your ending very much: "You created me to be Your Melody of Praise!" That left me with something to think about. :-)

09/03/06
Lovely word choices here and a nice flow. The last line was my favorite, too.
09/06/06
I enjoyed this poem. Simplistic detail. I got comfort from your second stanza and you did a good job with meter and rhyme. Blessings. :)
09/07/06
Beautifully written although I think the word "melody" was a bit overused. But, aside from that, it's wonderful! :)
09/07/06
I found myself singing this to the tune of the verses of "He Lives." ("I serve a risen Savior, He's in the world today....")
11/13/06
Please come and post your poetry at Poetry and Poets of God: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/poetryandpoetsofgod/