The Official Writing Challenge
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It's clear you are a brilliant thinker, with the heart of a preacher. You have something vital and significant to convey, couched in jewels of imagery and many keen turns of a phrase. However, in prose form your piece is almost too language-rich for the reader to digest. I suggest you step out in faith (combined with a little hard work and discipline) and transform this piece into what it truly is: a poem. You clearly have what it takes to excel in that genre. I say go for it!
05/29/06
Lovely. Made me feel cozy - like I was wrapped up in a beautiful quilt with a hot cup of tea in my hands. I can easily see this as a page from a devotional. Kate~