The Official Writing Challenge
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First, what a mom, not even angry about the lamp! I loved these twins! I find it so true that kids will use our logic back on us. This was a delightful piece to read. Looking forward to more from you!
02/25/05
I thought the comment about Aunt Julie was priceless! How often we ask people to do something we are not doing ourselves!
02/25/05
Great ending:)
What a story. Leave it to a child to use your mc's own words against her. Very believable, except perhaps the too patient reaction to the smashed lamp! :) Really loved it. Congratulations on a well deserved win.
11/24/05
This was a cute message. I know it's a late review. But, eh. Better late than never.