The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/17
What a great way to tell that familiar story. Well done.
10/13/17
Great job with the voice and perspective in this piece. The switch in verb tenses felt a little awkward in places but otherwise it was an enjoyable read.
Yes, retelling a Bible story in a personal way is always a challenge to keep it as true as possible even when other information is added.

Keep your eyes in his word and your heart in heaven.