The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/14
Oh my goodness! This sounded like an "authentic story" although labeled fiction.

It was certainly on topic and felt as if it were unfolding in real time.

I felt bad for the humans of course it goes without saying, I'm glad everyone was okay because it could have been much worse.

But, I must confess...I felt really bad for the leopards too, especially the one being poked in the eyes with a knife.

Great story...it was riveting and well written!

Excellent job here.

God bless~
11/25/14
Wow! While reading this gripping adventure, I caught myself holding my breath. I hope everyone recovered, including the leopard. Excellent story-telling.
Wow, what an exciting tale! I was almost disappointed to find that it was fiction.

I loved the lush descriptions of the mountains and the weather and the big cat.