The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/11
What a creative scenerio!
Good use of dialogue. It made me want more of the story.
I felt as though I was reading a scene from a western. Enjoyed the story, good writing.
Interesting story with a nice twist of humor at the end.
Congratulations on your first place and EC win. Great job!
03/17/11
Congratulations on your win, though an optional title could be "Bride Goes After a Fall!" Good fun read.
03/19/11
Congratulations on your EC choice award. I loved the humor and story immensely. The MC's were interesting and lively.
Absolutely love this. Great humor and glad to see Charlene walk out that door, for Foster's sake! :)