The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/10
I do enjoy fall and its rich colors do turn my heart toward God, the Creator of it all. I like the part about how, even though November seals its fate, there is hope for the tree (come spring).
This is a lovely poem. The trees are so beautiful this time of year. It might be a tad weak on the topic but still a lovely poem and nonetheless a beautiful letter from God
11/01/10
I associate with the awe felt over a golden leaf and of the Creator who thought of such a drifting letter of delight.
Shann might have a point in that no ink has crossed the bark or leaf-it is a beaufitul poem nonethless Perhaps poets have poetic license.
11/01/10
Lovely poem, very seasonal.

I see the metaphor of the letters in the last stanza, but I'm afraid that this one might have strayed a bit too far from the topic, perhaps?

Beautiful imagery thouughout.
11/10/10
I enjoyed your poem very much. You described my favorite season beautifully.
11/10/10
My first comments did not do your poem justice. It's much more than just a description. You used nature beautifully to honor its Creator. Beautiful.