The Official Writing Challenge
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LOL! What a fun, light-hearted read. The title set me up for the twist to come. Good one!
08/03/09
I was wondering where the border jumpers came in. Very good story. And yes, unique:)
Jovial fish story! Thanks for the entertainment.
Illegal aliens was a great hint!! And this was a great read, too. You have quite an imagination which will be a big plus in your writing career. Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us!
08/04/09
For some reason I got lost during the first read. Went back and read it again and it clicked.Good descriptions.