The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/08
Hi - What an interesting way to write you story. Loved it! Especially the Hook - to hurt them - great laugh - You have a special gift for writing . Thank you for sharing. I will be remembering this story on Christmas morning.
10/17/08
I enjoyed this piece a lot. Creative and well-written.
What a great object lesson! I especially liked the Christmas lights' speech - Very. Enjoyable. Story!
What a wonderful story! I love the way the angel swept down for the inspirational pep talk. And how the lights blinked out one word sentences. Very nice. Congratulations on being Highly Commended. A well deserving piece.
10/23/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. Nice, creative entry for the topic.