The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/08
Rhythm a little irregular, but the message is powerful. I was particularly excited over the line
"I live by following rays of love,
Like one explores uncharted lands;"
This little poem is so very real and true..Good Job...
09/07/08
Bravo! Good job all the way through! I loved this!
09/08/08
I think you're right. Many times we fail to live and/or follow God because we don't dare.
01/19/09
I think I found (Pharisees) I do like the way you used the words. I guess i would have to say it was a little choppy, but really good thoughts.