The Official Writing Challenge
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This is such a cute little poem. I really enjoyed it.
Good Job !!!
08/29/08
Very sweet and nostaligc, and I love the hope in the last stanza!

A note: "flies" instead of "flys".

This is a just-right poem, very satisfying to read.
Delightful little poem with a wonderful message