The Official Writing Challenge
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Perfect for topic, I love a good Lazarus story, great job!
I enjoyed this take on the topic.
Some inconsistency in meter in the fourth and sixth stanzas was a little distracting, but did not damage the overall effect of the poem.
I enjoyed your Lazarus poem very much and loved how you ended it with a wonderful promise for all believers:
God's dreams will someday be awakened
I realize this was about Lazarus, but several lines encouraged me as I am asked set aside my own dreams right now... the sign of a story well-told!
Oh very nice! I liked your second verse best of all. Your imagery is really great. ^_^