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Topic: Illustrate the meaning of "Every Dark Cloud has a Silver Lining" (without using the actual phrase or literal example). (02/28/08)
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TITLE: White Blurs | Previous Challenge Entry
By Henry Clemmons
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
and hard it quakes in fright
No time to swerve
or pray or blink an eye
White blurs at speeds
of ninety plus at night.
Wrong lane high beams
my god I see the light
Car flips glass breaks
I’m flung so quick I fly
Heart pounds so fast
and hard it quakes in fright.
No time to think
if I had lived life right
My Shoulder breaks
leg’s crack I start to cry
White blurs at speeds
of ninety plus at night.
Wet grass warm blood
fresh tears all mix in blight
Shorts gasps of air
I struggle not to die
Heart pounds so fast
and hard it quakes in fright.
I hear a voice
there was no car in sight
A tree had fell
and blocked my path on by
Heart pounds so fast
and hard it quakes in fright
White blurs at speeds
of ninety plus at night.
God saved my life
white blurs as angels speed
Now roll to church
my chair is on four wheels
Heartaches at peace
I praise the Lord indeed.
Warm winds turn cool
Fall leaves blush red from green
Eye’s blue tear up
I want this to be real
God Saved my life
white blurs as angels speed.
Acorns fall down
and plant themselves as seeds
They lie and die
silent and make no deals
Heartaches at peace
I praise the Lord indeed.
Moist lips upturned
sing songs of my new creed
Old man had died
under my car’s cold steel
God saved my life
white blurs as angels speed.
Arose from death
survived and was set free
Jesus my strength
regardless how I feel
God saved my life
white blurs as angels speed
Heartaches at peace
I praise the Lord indeed.
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One tiny thing--"legs" should not have an apostrophe. Oops.
This is really a masterpiece, and I'm privileged to have read it.