The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/07
Very vivid descriptions and wonderful images portraying fellowship. I like the analogy to colors that blend to create new and vibrant hues.
10/20/07
Absolutely lovely message and imagery - your language and message is just wonderful. Love this!
Beautiful imagery - I found this very soothing and restful.
10/20/07
This is AMAZING!
10/23/07
Such beautiful thoughts - but lacked the synchronized smooth flow that comes with rhymed poetry, which I call 'poetry in motion'; however...To each his own...but loved the thoughts; they were beautifully poetic, even on their own-but with rhythym - It would have been a WOW! (just my opinion - which is nonconsequential) Nice job.
10/24/07
I usually prefer poetry that is predictable in rhythem and rhyme, but you have won me over with this one. Wonderfully creative, this is a gem.
Wow, very good blend of metaphors, imagery, and symbolism! Please don't tell me you did this in five minutes, Ben! You make it look too easy! Lol, I saw myself in the red. Big shock, I know... (lol)