The Official Writing Challenge
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This is lovely. I found myself singing along with it. I believe it could easily be set to music. Great job!
Lyrical and full of heartfelt devotion. Nice job.
Wonderful poem. So uplifting.
05/08/07
I agree--this needs to be set to music. It's lyrical and rhythmical, and altogether lovely.
05/08/07
AMEN!! I love your theme of celebrating in His presence! Inspiring message throughout your well-written poem! :)
I too agree that this sang to me. Great message--I'd love to hear it with music.
I can only say "Amen: to this devotional. It is so heartfelt and sincere that it is truly an inspiration.
Thank-you for sharing.
05/09/07
Just lovely and musical - and what a wonderful message. Absolutely excellent.
He never gives us more than we can handle. I can only say that this is beautiful. It must have been something to write. Awesome job! ^_^ You've definitely inspired someone.
05/12/07
What a beautiful poem of praise and humility. Thank you for sharing. God bless you