The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/06
I enjoyed this! Good job getting into the main character's head.
11/22/06
You’ve really shown the inner conflict a twelve-year old young boy. While I’m not sure I understand why the lifeguard told the boy that he had saved her, I enjoyed the story and especially like the last two lines.
You've got a really good story going here. Although there were a few places that confused me, I enjoyed reading this. :^)
12/05/06
This story is deeply inspiring, and it shows Christ's love in your heart. Thank you for putting your faith into words. Keep writing for God's glory.
Jesus loves you!