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10/27/06
Thanks for the lovely tribute to this true heroine of our past.
10/29/06
I love historical fiction. This was a great peek into a great missionary's life. I would suggest reworking the sentence where you first introduce Mary Slessor. It felt a little awkward. You've left me with a feeling of admiration for this woman and a desire to know more about her. Thank you.
10/29/06
Likewise this excellent article sent me to Encarta to corroborate the facts. A great example of personal sacrifice that goes on to this day.
10/30/06
I actually read this article a few days ago, and it has stuck with me until I had to come back and read it again. What a fascinating person, and you told her story in a way that drew me in and brought me back. Excellent work.