The Official Writing Challenge
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Fun poem!
I loved this. It struck me as a loving tribute to a real person of beautiful character. Great poem!
09/04/06
The rhyming was super; but sometimes it didn't always make sense. But all in all I thought this poem quite delightful and enjoyed reading it. Job well done!
09/05/06
What a tenderly felt poem!
The first stanza only having three lines while the others all had four kind of threw me off a bit at first, but I ended up enjoying this. I really liked the lines about never venturing far from any grounded proof.
09/06/06
Very cool :) a nice twist on the topic :)
Good job on this! It is definitely an enjoyable read!
09/06/06
Yes, our own melody! We all have one. Can you hear yours? Great tribute.
09/06/06
Very nicely done. I loved the flow of the poem!
09/06/06
I enjoyed both the message and the flow of this. Great job!