The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/06
This is a powerful visual that we would all to well to keep in mind...the Father occupying our souls as His home. Good job.
07/22/06
Liked this one. I liked what happened in each room. Great job. Def a Fav!
07/24/06
A creative and thoughtful piece. Lots of good phrases. One of my favorites: "..her faith needed...dry ground of reassurance." Well done.
Your imagery is very nice. I appreciated the story more the second time I read it because at first I didn't understand the house. I wonder if the phrase "the house of her heart" could be placed a little earlier in the story...just a suggestion.