The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/06
I felt so sad for her but happy in the end that she knew what to do. Makes you think about one's own relationship with family both parents and children. I had a little time with the tense but I couldn't put my finger on why so probably nothing.Very true emotions!:)
07/17/06
What a melancholy piece--I think that if you edited the tense inconsistencies, it'd be wonderful.