The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/06
Best line. “The same is true with the fruits of the Spirit. You still had the ability to run; you’d just let it slide. And you still have the capacity for God’s peace. You just have to train to get it back.”
Liked the message. It challenged me. Great job!

06/13/06
Very good. A clever analogy, well executed. Like the dialogue.
06/14/06
Good flow and dialog. Creative way to share a message of peace.