The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/06
What a beautiful story. You use your words wisely and well.
05/25/06
Liked the story. A little confused with the lines
“Would you change any of this?” he asked simply.
“Are you kidding?” I wanted to say, but he was right.
but the conclusion was good.
05/25/06
Count it all joy!! Not always easy, but when we look to Him we find His joy.
Good job!
I wanted to adopt her myself! Thanks for this touching piece.
05/26/06
This was very touching. I like the fact that it didn't have a sugary sweet ending - it made the story more meaninful. (Unless of course this is non-fiction!)