The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/06
The next to last paragraph is the most compelling. It should be the heart beat of this story, and the reason for its writing.
03/09/06
You've expressed well the helplessness, the frustration, and the pain. Good work.
03/09/06
A great story, a great message and very well written. The lesson we have learned is that you cannot depend on Man; God is our ONLY hope - and reliable, dependable and keeps HIS word!
03/10/06
Well done! I remember that interview, and you've captured the mood of that tense time very well.
03/11/06
Nice capture of a difficult time.