The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this one! Great story. Wonderful writing.
You are a good writer. I loved your descriptions of the water. Not only could I see it, I could hear it. Good message too.
03/05/06
Oh wow - I could feel your panic -I'm a non-swimmer myself! Good lesson -our heavenly Father is always there!